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|Paradise-Lost| Magaret Astor // Updated

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edit: 270314 - Updated Weakness/ Drunk headcanon + Gb/ History Alt.1
- made corrections in Dislikes and others
290314 - Updated History Alt.2
040314 - made changes in history and gb
050414 - theme change 
070414 - voice change

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★ Name: Magaret Astor

★ Alias/Doll: Red Queen

★ Class: Class A 

★ Arcana Lineage: The Tower

★ Faction: Lady

★ Age: 16

★ Gender: Female

★ Height: 168 cm | + shoes = 172

★ Weight: 52 kg

★ Blood Type: B

★ Nationality: American

★ Year: Junior 

★ Weapon: Crimson blade!! //shot.. I mean, Scythe

★ Rank: ...?

★ X-Hollow: Ring //allows her to manipulate black lightning, without it she cant

★ Skills: 
- Faking 
- Playing the Violin
- Using guns, shooting, etc.
- Being able to keep her dignity at all times , well almost all
- Black lightning Manipulation // its just like lightning that is consumed by shadows and chaos. Unlike nomal lightning, black lightning isnt that strong by itself, and tends to drain alot of the user's energy. //also depending on the setting, environment ad resources, since it can take up energy from ANYTHING around her, including opponents
- Martial arts ? kind of.

★ Power? Maybe? 
Deus : Cant really do aything except shooting around and draining/absorbing energy from her surroundings, or in other words charging up
1/4 DF: her skills will level up//in terms of speed, strength and physical abilities, also gives her gun the power to turn into a scythe
1/2 DF: ability to use elemental powers on her weapon +powerup of 1/4
3/4 DF: allows her to drain her enemies elemental power and convert to her own //black lightning//
Full Doll : Unlimited ability to use elemental powers on her weapon, Everything powers up too maximum 

★ Personality: 
- Very prideful, somehow, and selfish at times
- Friendly, polite and kind on first meetings but her attitude will change depending on who you are.
- Doesnt trust anyone easily
- Hard to know what she's thinking or feeling, she'll always laugh at everything and puts up a form that never really changes. Unless she gets really pissed off or cant hold it anymore. // she also never talks about how she feels, only about what she knows.
- Acts like she doesnt really care but she does
- Can be arrogant, rude , dominant and determined at times. Especially when working with others, she can be quite bossy.
- Thinks that whatever she thinks is right will always be and will feel anger towards one who disagrees with her opinion.
- Abit of a Dorodere // if you dont know what this means its "Sweet outside, messed up and disturbed inside." And YES it is different from YANDERE. So please dont think she's insanely crazy and possesive like Yuno.
- Loyal towards ones she respects and would often call them as Miss or My queen that kind off stuff.
- In other words, she'll always fake as a polite and sweet person to hide what she really thinks about you, though that changes over time. //shes also flirty.. sometimes

★ Likes: 
- Shopping /fashion, that kinda stuff
- Insulting people
- Seeing people she hates suffer //tho she wont show it
- Taking amusement in things she shouldnt
- ICE CREAMS
- coffee

★ Dislikes: 
- People who underestimate her
- Waiting
- Annoying childish people
- Sports
- Tea 

★ History:
Alt. 1 : 
As a child Magaret was born in a wealthy family and had everything she wanted. Her mother had an eye in fashion classical music, tea and would often teach her to play the violin. Though one day her dad disappeared and her mom lied to her that he died in action. Soon another man came into the house and remarried her mom. But Meg didnt notice anything for all she cared for was her mother.

One day she woke up abandoned in a small street beside an old house//she was about 10// Which was where her father was. He then took her to live with him and taught her how to use guns and to survive on her own. Meg soon became arrogant and didnt trust people easily because her mom betrayed and lied to her. 

After learning the truth, Meg felt hatred towards her mom and went back to meet her. She greeted her mom with a smile and acted as if she didnt know anything. Her mother didnt speak a word about where she had beed and howd she come back, all she kept saying was how much she missed her, but of corse, Meg knew this was all a pathetic lie. Soon lather after night came, Meg chopped off her mom and her new husband's head and hanged it beside her father's portrait. She then stole all the valuables and left the house.

Alt.2 :  //this might be triggering?//  
Magaret lived in a wealth family with her father and mother, her father was a high ranked soldier and would often teach her how to use guns and all. Her mother was a beautiful business woman who loved fashion, claasy stuff, tea and would always buy her fancy looking clothes and becuse of her love for music, shed teach her to play the violin.

Though Magaret wasnt happy for she felt unloved by her parents and felt like they were faking their love towards her. So one day she ran away and met a man in an old house on the outskirts of town.
She was happy living with him and enjoyed life. But one day her dad and mom came and ordered her to come back. She was confused of how they found her and looked at the man.
He laughed at her with a pile of money in his hands. She then knew the truth and was brought back. Her parents locked her up in a room with only 1 window, gave her food through the small gap at the door and never let her out for months.
Meg started self harming and attempted committing suicide.

As time passed she couldnt take it and wanted to start a new life so she decided to climb out the window and managed to escape with a little injury.
After escaping she went back to the mans house and killed him by chopping off his head and stole all the money for her own survival. 

★ Others:
not really sure what to write here but oh well
- She doesnt really hates boys and considers equality among the two genders but still views them as enemies.
- She's not really that kind of a super NEAT and TIDY person, even if she looks like it.
- If you are alone with her, she'll sometimes be more open to you. depending on the situation and the person also.
- Has a way of speaking to fool you to get information out of you so... I dunno just beware of that.
- For some reason she'll always carry a gun with her and ice cream. //this GUN can turn into her SCYTHE btw //forgot to write orz

Genderbend: Magnus
- Magnus is the complete opposite of Meg.
- rude, arrogant, likes to look down on people. //abit like pirate iggy//
- Abit of a tsundere //slapped
- cocky, playful
- Everything Meg isnt, but they still fake towards others, just in a different way.

Weaknesses :
- Mainly when you act the complete opposite of how she'd expect you to she'll go silent for a while.
- If you know what she's thinking then she'll kinda loose it
- Sports //again
- TEA - THE ULTIMATE WEAPON //shot - Give her tea and she'll act like a mad woman =u=b //kicked
//tea gives her flashbacks of memories she had with her mom causing her to feel guilty and angry at the same time.
Drunk headcanon?:
- If she's drunk she'll act exactly like Magnus //or her gb form// which is very rude, curses alot and likes to mock on people, tease, insult. In other words she's very rude and straight forward at times.
- If her Gb form is drunk he'll act polite and friendly like Magaret.

Additional not needed to know stuff but im just gonna put it in cause why not.
Her voice/ singing voice would sound like this:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeihVL…

Battle themes:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=ENaYHu…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=zHuSaK…


Main theme:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=dl30WD…

so many themes orz

That's it, for now


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Character /Art © me



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captainrazorripper's avatar
Hey, I like your OC. She cool, a dorodere, and like an anti-hero or a villain.